Thoughts on a Piece?

[DaveJ]

Hey folks,
Looking for some feedback on this one. It ended up sounded nothing like I originally intended and now I'm left wondering if it makes any sense to fresh ears. Any and all critiques welcomed! Thanks!

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[nathantboler]

Sounds really nice to my ears!

 

[dflood]

Well I liked it. Hopefully others can provide a more professional analysis. The only quibble I had was by about 3:33 it sounds like the piece has been steadily working towards something requiring a conclusion or restatement but the final movement doesn’t seem to resolve that completely (for me at least). Please bear in mind that my lane is traditional music, folk and bluegrass!

 

[DaveJ]

Thanks to you both for the feedback! I know what you mean about the resolve, I think I felt that i'm constantly finishing off every tune with a resolving chord and I wanted to change it up a bit. But it does feel like it needs it.

 

[Amicus]

I enjoyed it. It was interesting to listen to, and I liked the various details and textures. I was never quite sure where it was going to lead next, which in this case strikes me as a good thing.