Thank you for your thoughts,
I've been thinking about your comment here for a bit sort of double checking the piece multiple times. trying to have that point of view that it might be reverb heavy under the parking lot...I'm not feeling that at all to tell you the truth,
I tested on multiple devices...monitors, car, phone, tv...headphones.
Is it that its not clear? did I over Eq it? which i've been doing.
appreciate any member chiming in incase my ears are not catching it.