Hi tpoots,
First of all great job - there’s a ton of good stuff going on here. You should be proud, especially if this is new territory for you.
I’m loving the variety throughout the piece and I can tell you spent a lot of time meticulously matching the picture. You made good decisions in how you chose to structure the composition. It feels like it’s more than the sum of its parts.
On a constructive note, your piece would benefit from a bit more thematic development, but I really like the overall structure, chords, and even that tasty bit of sound design at :27
It’s pretty clear that you have good intuition. If you like this style and keep at it I have no doubt it’ll become 2nd nature.
I hope some of these thoughts are helpful. I look forward to hearing more in the future
Douglas