It was a quick demo to show here the tone and English pronounciation, so there are some out of tune notes and things that could be improved.
I don't use any script. First I create the melody in the DAW, which I import as midi in the Synth V Pro editor, I write the lyrics and from there I start to edit the intonation and adjust the duration and strength of the phonemes.
It's important to determine what's wrong for you in first place, as the app offers the tools to tweak most of those things to your liking:
"T" at end of "last" sounds tacked on: reduce phoneme strengh, reduce breathness.
The noise could be reduced with Breathness parameter.
Him, warning...it never ceases to amaze me how the perception of a syllable changes when a vibrato is out of phase or is wrong.
Fight is short? make it longer! XD
Not sure what you mean with the over emphasized "the"s, perhaps you mean that they start very deep before reaching the tonality?
I've noticed that in other cases at the beginning of phrases with plosives and I think it's more because of Weina's way of singing, but it can be reduced. In general I found Weina's autopitch tunning more pleasant and accurate than Solaria (who is too nervous).
It is still early to draw conclusions but I liked the first contact, the voice is very beautiful and full of nuances. I prefer the Weina's tone and her way of singing, but I'm not the person to leave an opinion about her English. I will publish more demos.
As bonus, another quick and unedited demo just to test the "Powerful" vocal mode + Tension in the high register (forget the flow and the too deep vibratos).
View attachment Ray of light_Weina vocal test.mp3