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Thanks to everyone for your feedback!
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Here's a piece I just finished. Happy to receive any sort of feedback on composition, structure, mix, orchestration, etc. I've learned a lot from the fine and fair people of vi-control, and submit myself to your lashings!
Thanks for listening!
PS: I'll list sample libraries used tomorrow. My wife is waiting to watch OA with me!
wrong thread bro?Myers Briggs INTP MBTI?
Not quite what I expected from the example you posted earlier, because that version came nearer the end of the piece, but I like very much what you did with it. Really, very lovely. Also great title.
beautiful, very intricate and textured. Love it! Got a bit of Danny Elfmann vibes. Or maybe JNH.
I was thinking Thomas Newman as well.Very nice.. (Thomas Newman for me).
Very nice.. (Thomas Newman for me).
Really very beautiful, great listen to end a long day. I'l be listening again with fresh ears tomorrow.
thought the same thing about the piano bitsVery nice.. (Thomas Newman for me).
Beautiful!
My initial sketches for this song had some key changes in sections that I ultimately omitted...
Great piece! (INFJ here) I agree with Dave about a key change. All it takes to do an effective key change sometimes is change one note or a chord to shift the tonal center.
But really, you have a very evocative piece here and a clear affect - so sometimes more fiddling isn't worth it.
but modern ears are used to abrupt modulations and indeed expect them. So it’s something to keep in mind.
That sounds to me like your extroverted intuition at work. (Another INTP here.) Personally, I thought you had enough textural and motivic variation in the middle section that lack of tonal variation didn't bother me, though you could have used that development to move tonally if you wanted to. Another place you could move tonally is at the very end, taking one of the afterthought statements in the coda out of key for a bit of tonal surprise in order to more emphatically set up the close. But I do think your piece works quite nicely as it is, and I very much like how the full version of the tune emerges from the development rather than being stated, developed or varied, and then returned to.Some common feedback I've gotten on past songs was that there wasn't enough grounding them or enough clear patterns to lock onto.