Really like the beginning, nice tension, it promises a lot. Then the the woods shorts come in with the oboe line and they feel a bit out of the blue, but I get happy when the violin kicks in. However, in general there's a lack of cohesion (or simply legato) through the piece, as if it's not only a fragment but a bit fragmented as well. Nice melodic ideas that would lift more if the sound image was to be a bit more...whole, for lack of a better word. To reach the feeling of musicians really playing together, which would take some work with the dynamics, possibly also adding a touch more reverb, and also working more with the tempo map. If you could reach the feeling that all the parts are glued together this would be very nice.