muk
Senior Member
Hi everyone,
it's been a while, and I'd love to have some feedback on this one. I wrote it as a lullaby for my godson, and it should be part of a gift for baptism. There is still a bit of time for revisions - any help to improve it is much appreciated:
https://app.box.com/s/5dzh3rw2t322xg0upcw3inrvo1bl0skh
it's been a while, and I'd love to have some feedback on this one. I wrote it as a lullaby for my godson, and it should be part of a gift for baptism. There is still a bit of time for revisions - any help to improve it is much appreciated:
https://app.box.com/s/5dzh3rw2t322xg0upcw3inrvo1bl0skh