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Mysterylab

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My latest... Hope you enjoy


I got some good feedback on my last piece; about my soundspace not sounding very unified. I just sprang for MIR, and I think it's an improvement for putting these disparate sound libraries into the same room in a (fairly) convincing way.

Composition and production comments welcomed.
 

col

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Some nice ideas in there - well worth fine tuning and improving your midi programing and mixing on.It looses hold of my attention after 2.20 . interesting again from 3.30 then peters out a bit in the last 30 secs. Some more reinforcement of the opening theme might be good. keep at it !
 

BlackDorito

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I think if you are going to have a steady marching background and build up, it would do well with a marching army (somewhat *happy* infidels, I would say). Now if you present it with no video (concert versus stage), you could shorten it and add variety. Don't make it Bolero. I like it.
 

Seasharp

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My latest... Hope you enjoy


I got some good feedback on my last piece; about my soundspace not sounding very unified. I just sprang for MIR, and I think it's an improvement for putting these disparate sound libraries into the same room in a (fairly) convincing way.

Composition and production comments welcomed.


I know your intent was to musically depict a moving marching army and in that effort you were successful. I would have liked a little more rhythmic variation possible in the center of the piece especially where the chimes entered. But overall I think the music is true to the title.
 
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Thanks for listening, and for the good feedback. Definitely it's a bit disjointed for a pure musical piece. It was conceived as a compose-to-film challenge I set for myself; trying to work up an action trajectory based on an animation storyboard, so it's got sort of a "false epilogue" section in the middle. Not sure how successful it is but the comments will help me push for improvement.
 
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