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Forever, is that a myth ?

Discussion in 'Composition, Orchestration & Technique' started by Muluku S., Jul 11, 2018.

  1. Muluku S.

    Muluku S. Member

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    Hi guys, here a new track from me. Please can i have some thoughts on it ?
    please keep in mind i'm a newbie composer ^^ !



     
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  2. imagegod

    imagegod Senior Member

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    Very nice...if your ambition is for movie scores, you definitely have my vote.

    If you think criticism could be useful, I'll give you two (very small and painless):

    Too 'portamento-y' for my taste...but others may differ.

    The title...how about a little mystery and poetry (using your same words):

    O Mýthos, Tou Gia Pánta?

    Looks better in Greek (IMHO)...YMMV...

    Really, very good stuff...keep up the good work!
     
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  3. Jaap

    Jaap Best audience ever...booh!

    Beautiful, very touching and emotional in a good way!

    I agree with what @imagegod said above about the portamento and I want to add a few small tips to enchance it maybe a bit more. The overal reverb amience sounds a bit disconnnected, it could benefit from a general reverb that glues it all together. Now the different layers sound a bit different reverb wise.
    Also maybe pan the instruments a bit (cello maybe a bit to the right, keep the harp in the middle and the choir a tiny bit to the right) to enhance the spectrum.
    Great work Muluku! Enjoyed it.
     
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    Muluku S.

    Muluku S. Member

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    Thank you all for your kind words and valuable feedbacks! i will consider it.
     

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