Does this work?

Discussion in 'Member's Compositions' started by sIR dORT, Jun 9, 2019.

  1. sIR dORT

    sIR dORT Member

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    Got feedback that sounded like two different cues, with the first part sounding mournful and then the second sounding more adventurous/wondrous. Do you agree, or does it work?



    I'm on a tight schedule as this cue needs to be finished within the next week and a half, so please don't hesitate to give feedback.
     
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  2. markleake

    markleake Recovering sale addict

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    Erm... they sound like two different cues to me. What is supposed to connect them?
     
  3. Grim_Universe

    Grim_Universe Active Member

    It really depends on a context of usage of the piece. If the piece is used in a video where something dramatically changes, thеn yes, it kinda works. If it is a background piece which is supposed to work by itself, then no, it doesn't work. It
    should have a A->B->A1 structure then.
     
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    sIR dORT

    sIR dORT Member

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    Theme and similar chord structure. For awhile I thought they had the same mood, but I'm not thinking so anymore after various feedback like yours.
     
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    sIR dORT

    sIR dORT Member

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    Updated version, thoughts?



    (Bear with some of the programming of the dynamics, legato, and tempo - they're still a work in progress)
     
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  7. aegisninja

    aegisninja New Member

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    Idk, personally I really like that first version. Totally does have a different mood, but it's also awesome imo.
     

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