Thank you
@sekkosiki for putting your piece forward for feedback and comments. I've had a listen to the whole recording.
There's a lot of creative agitation going on there. Many ideas are flowing and attempting to gain attention. As soon as a section comes to notice, another moves in to compete and/or take over.
The libraries used are a nice quality collection and sound effective. If a little too loud overall for an orchestral piece. Loud is great for the emphasis parts, but dainty is also important for that finesse.
The mix is very much 'in the face' of the listener throughout. My own preference would be for it to draw me in rather than pin me to the wall.
There are a lot of hints at melodic possibilities. Though they never really fulfill, or come to the promise hoped for. They seem to disappear in the next immediate idea that presents itself.
Now, the above is not to say that what you have presented is of no value. Not at all. It is full of ideas, and musical bits, pieces and sections that would benefit from further development, organisation and construction. From a thread flowing through, that the listener can follow musically - a melody line to hang on to, with supportive/occasional harmony - with a clear and definite rhythm where appropriate.
In summary, I would say further refinement and consideration of the intended effects on the listener of the piece would be additionally beneficial. Suggestions: The 'Boy' of the title could be a specific instrument/melody. The 'Stars' are already sparkling throughout, just need a hint of gentility/distance and perhaps 'awe'.
I wish you well with further generating that 'cinematic image' you have in the title of your piece.