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Hello. I think you need to strip it back to basics and get the chords figured out. I’d also suggest, if you played the parts in live, not to hard quantise everything so much. Some styles of music need hard quantisation but not the last track you shared above.
If the MIDI was drawn in rather than performed then that is a problem for the style in the above track. If you were to play it live on a keyboard and try to keep editing to a minimum then it would sound much more musical and, consequently, more pleasing to the ear.
I think the chords/intervals in the low piano part are too low to be harmonically supportive, and sound too muddy. Maybe bring those up an octave.
It has some interesting seeds of ideas which could be developed further. To me it sounds like you are trying to run before you can walk, musically speaking.
Thanks for sharing and I hope my comments are useful to you.
If the MIDI was drawn in rather than performed then that is a problem for the style in the above track. If you were to play it live on a keyboard and try to keep editing to a minimum then it would sound much more musical and, consequently, more pleasing to the ear.
I think the chords/intervals in the low piano part are too low to be harmonically supportive, and sound too muddy. Maybe bring those up an octave.
It has some interesting seeds of ideas which could be developed further. To me it sounds like you are trying to run before you can walk, musically speaking.
Thanks for sharing and I hope my comments are useful to you.
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