Hi! I am (Dmitry Lubenskiy) one who is in 10. If you need any help or suggestions -- anything I can do for you -- welcome.
My humble suggestions:
Joao -- -- you don't feel the picture. Check a video, warp your timeline with markers, adjust tempo, then write music.
Woodie -- too much tragedy. You should go thru the movie and make points where music mood is changed. And you don't use Orchestra. You use instruments. Think about it.
Yoshi -- very good work. But it is very selfish. You was involved too much in composing, and you forgot about the picture. Check Tom & Jerry cartoon, you will see how every note of your music should follow the action.
LSDMO -- you were on the right track, but you forgot about wrapping video with your music. You feel the picture, but your music is not flexible for the picture.
PeteH -- you don't follow the picture. To much dissonances in your music (imho), and I suggest to change string library - it is too mechanics.
xandersores -- very good work, better then others here I think. You should work on better fit to a picture (and you did well). And you should be more selfish -- your music is very good, and your orchestration is in the level. Find this level where you can serve the picture, and show up your music.
I am very sorry if I said something wrong or offensive, but I thought it might be helpful.
BR.
Dmitry Lubenskiy.