Heya,
Here`s my first trailer track I wrote after studying the Evenant Course. Any feedback much appreciated!
Here`s my first trailer track I wrote after studying the Evenant Course. Any feedback much appreciated!
I disagree with @NoamL about the intro, I wouldn't change it,
Heya,
Here`s my first trailer track I wrote after studying the Evenant Course. Any feedback much appreciated!
I disagree as well. If the piano and strings were playing different melodies, then maybe. But as it stands now, the strings are just acting as support for the piano.
I don't like the singer either. Also, your track seems to be lacking low end.
Otherwise, it's cool.
Heya,
Here`s my first trailer track I wrote after studying the Evenant Course. Any feedback much appreciated!
Really nice track, was wondering....where did you get the vocal samples from?
Damn! All the vocal libraries around and none have samples like these. Good work on the track, really like it!Thanks!
They are real.
Damn! All the vocal libraries around and none have samples like these. Good work on the track, really like it!
hey Mike sorry if this is too blunt but i want to push every composer including myself to be the best composer they can be. for me trailer music is not so much about sound packages and structure and more about mood. the overwhelming mood that comes to the fore when i listen to the best trailer tracks out there is STRUGGLE. i just didn't get that here. by 40 seconds in the build towards struggle had faded on me. also you have no accents big hits to emphasize the mood.
anyway this is just my opinion but for your next tracks i would suggest listening to lots and lots of reference tracks rather than following courses and really get into the frame of mind the MOOD.
Danny
Not sure if you listened all the way through but there are indeed big hits in there and I used zero "sound packages". Everything was done from me hitting some drums, reversing them, distorting a tin whistle, pitch shifting them. You get the idea.
If you haven`t taken the Evenant course or want to delve into trailers, I would recommend it to you. You`ll get something out of it for sure.
I like it, love all the sound design and the intro is awesome.
My only criticism would be that all the bass seems to disappear from the mix after the climax. The intro and buildup seem to have loads of bass/sub going on and then the climax hits and it drops away.